I apologize that this post is so short. I’m heading out for a quick getaway to NYC and I’ve been scrambling to get the chapter done. I didn’t get as much time to focus on the notes. But here they are. This chapter moved the story forward by answering some of the question so that I could raise new ones. I’m not a fan of dragging things out.
At the same time, Charlie is still unsure of his goal. He wants to bring back Charlie, but doesn’t know how. Introducing Audrey and outing him to the school is the first big step toward empowering my protagonist to kick his efforts into overdrive.
We also met Charlie’s enemy…one of them, anyway.